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I like that you're explaining your personal connection to Suikoden and how the character evolved during the design process. One way to make this section even stronger is to get to the "hook" a little faster. The first few sentences provide useful context, but viewers might be more engaged if you start with the contest itself or the surprising moment when you realised your original idea wouldn't work. For example, you could open with: "I entered a contest to create a new Star of Destiny for Suikoden STAR LEAP, but halfway through I realised my entire concept didn't fit the lore..." Then explain your love for the series and how that led you there.

After so I don't release too much info about where I'm staying. I also can't bring my PC with me so editing would be a pain, haha.

I like this idea - as I'm moving to a different place each day, I was going to structure each video around a location, but that could get repetitive. I wanted to make a video with a clear itinerary so others could replicate the trip.

I agree with Cyan - highlight key quotes and concepts for students. They will likely be using your work to revise for exams or study so making the cocepts clear and concise would be very helpful for them.

I love this idea! Personally, I wouldn't watch a tech video but I would watch a silly AI test over and over. A clip like that would make me way more likely to go watch the full video.

Rather than a match report, I think this would be better framed with a singular argument on how they played.

This is fun! To improve your title, I'd add in some extra detail: "Best Kids Parks in Shanghai for Families (2026 Guide)" or "5 Best Kids Parks in Shanghai That Your Children Will Love". These should make you more searchable in the algorithm.

I like this idea - simple and straightforward to make, but the payoff will be huge. It could be helpful to touch on nearby attractions, so tourists are better equipped to plan their trips.

Having some side-by-side shots would look really great if you could mirror the setup exactly. Zoom-ins are great for showing the foods texture, but I also think you need to use soft, natural lighting from the side or back. Focus on steam, vibrant colours, and clean, uncluttered styling to make the food appealing.

Your opening hook is great - it's visually distinct, and it shows the food preparation process, which is interesting. I think your ending needs a bit of work. Perhaps invite the viewers to link in their favourite places for you to review? Or have them give their order in the comments.