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The childhood angle is HUGE, lean into it. Right now, your title doesn't convey the same emotiveness that you describe the game having on you. I'd put yourself at the center of the story. Something like: - I've Loved Suikoden Since Childhood: Now I'm Entering the STAR LEAP Contest - Creating a Suikoden Character 20 Years After Playing My First Game - From Childhood Fan to Suikoden STAR LEAP Contestant - Suikoden Shaped My Childhood: This Is My STAR LEAP Submission

The video you linked is engaging because you are constantly jumping from section to section. It also has music and dance elements that make you want to join in. Will you incorporate dance too? For TikTok, having it in 9:16 with the sections as up-down will be better visually compared to the video you linked. For retention, going from worst to best will encourage people to stick around as they get hooked and want to see who you choose as No. 1.

I think the strongest part of this intro is that it immediately establishes that this isn't just another team preview. The line about football being identity, pressure, pride and the hope of being seen gives Iran a unique angle compared to the dozens of generic World Cup breakdowns that will be released. My main concern is that the script promises a lot of emotion but doesn't give me a specific reason to care yet. You've told me Iran's story is intense, but not what makes it intense. I'd consider teasing one specific moment, challenge, or piece of history that viewers will want to learn more about. From a channel perspective, this feels much stronger if your audience enjoys storytelling and football culture. If your viewers usually come for tactical analysis, player scouting, or predictions, I'd bring one of those elements into the opening earlier so they know they're still getting the content they subscribed for. Overall, I like the direction. It feels more documentary-style than a standard team preview. I'd just make the hook more specific and give viewers a clearer reason to stay beyond "this story matters."

This is helpful as an introduction to AI tools. Is this a video for people with tech knowledge or people going in with zero knowledge? If it's the latter, use simple terms and make the information easily digestible because this can be an overwhelming topic for non-tech people.

I wonder, why Paris v London? Is there a relevance to your channel? From what I've seen, your posts tend to focus on London. If you're going to compare internationally, I think it would be great to turn this into a series so your viewers know not to always expect London-only recommendations.

I agree with Suikoden - put in some odd choices or lesser-known players to rage bait. Rage baiting will always get a conversation started as they feel compelled to point out your mistakes.

This is really fun! Lean into the Britishness of it all, using slang like "chippy" - the international audience will love that. It would be fun to talk about the side things that most people forget (vinegar, curry sauce, pickled eggs - do they change the feel of the meal?)

How long will this video be? I worry that because you focus only on one food, the video will be too short. Showing close-up footage of the chef preparing the food would make this video look more professional and add an extra dimension to the vlog.

Personally, I'm not interested in RVs. But I think if you have a following there for you, then this is a nice idea. It's basically a travel series that shows your entire journey. That could also be useful for others wanting to replicate your travels. Will you release it during your travels or after?

That's the ideal thing about audiobooks! You can listen on the move.